black star of darkness

Hey guys, this is the edited version, hopefully it meets your critisicm The iron gates loom menacingly, Staring down with their grave eyes, At the new penguins. They waddle through, ...

Hey guys, this is an updated version of my poem, can the same and other people comment on whether this is better or no. Thank you and thanks for all ...

This a poem I wrote a year ago for my art lesson on emotion Tell me what you think of it guys... Dark clouds encircle my life, Everybody hates me ...

There is a window, Upon a wall. A window, coloured green and red, A perfect square. On one side of this window, There is a child, Perfectly happy, surrounded by ...

This was inspired by the song Lie,Lie,Lie by Serj Tankian- Enjoy" Lie to me, spin me a tale, Avoid the question completetly. Just dont tell me the truth 'Cos I ...

Hey this is a sonnet I wrote at school and liked, so would some peeps mind giving their opinion please! My lonely soul forever lost to me, Out of reach ...

(Chorus) Lies, all lies, Everything in this world Is a lie. Lies, all lies, From the day that we are born 'Till the day that we die, Verse 1 You ...

Dancing, swirling, twirling, spinning in a pool of light Hidden, unknown and concealed, In the deepest depths of the night. Creeping, crawling, sneaking, Someone's in the darkness outside, Secretive,

He scampers up the hill. The sun, is shining bright. Joyfully, he skips, as he ascends this great height. His mind, it is racing, with a high Expectation What awaits ...

PROLOUGE Hi, I'm not too sure about this whole writing thing, to be honest with you. Let's get that straight from the off- I have never written more than about ...

Heavily edited and slightly shortened- Enjoy and stay tuned for more! PROLOUGE Hi, I'm not too sure about this whole writing thing to be honest with you. Let's get that ...

CHAPTER 1 It began for me, I think -my memory may be slightly impaired by all this alcohol I have been comforting myself with- as all good stories don't begin, ...

Hi, this is my first post in a while for many reasons, so I'll appreciate any helpful comments and obviously I may be slightly rusty. Enjoy ! ---------------------------- I hold ...

This is the Prologue of my novel, hope it intrigues you, the Chapter One will follow soon, please give much feedback PROLOUGE Hi, I'm not too sure about this whole ...

PROLOUGE Hi, I'm not too sure about this whole writing thing to be honest with you. Let's get that straight from the start- That sounds awkward. Instead say, "straight from ...

Hey there here is Chpater 2 and also edited Chapter 1 if you have not read it, you may also like to read the Prologue before reading this, feedback etc. ...

Spoiler! : This short story is based on the premise of "An Administrator at the top of a brain groaning at a bad pun" The question blared out over the ...